Tuesday, September 29, 2009

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Carrie's Blog

I like the feel of this blog post, it becomes very thought provoking and insightful as the post goes on. I liked how you were able to connect the idea of what "genuine" is to the idea of regurgitating what we're told. They're very related concepts, I would have liked if you took this idea and went further with it. For instance, how can you tell when someone regurgitates ideas or answers? How can you get a genuine response out of someone? What else to people regurgitate outside of speech and ideas? how can you get those things to be genuine? there are a lot of questions to be posed in that idea, your post would be more compelling if you had asked and addressed those questions, or questions of your own.

I thought your ideas on destiny were very interesting. You compared the idea of destiny to your own life and were able to address large questions in a simple way that readers could understand. I like the idea that destiny is when your essence is predetermined, this is a very concise definition of what destiny is. All in all, good post, I liked the way you were able to convey your ideas in a clear way, keep up the good work

Mara's Blog

I like this idea that humans are compelled to make themselves better, however I'd like you to expand on that idea. How do you know that all people want to make themselves better? maybe thats something that you yourself believe, if you can't share thoughts you won't know if other people think the same way as you?


You also brought up the idea that everything we do is based on what other people do. Are we truly free if all of our actions are subconsciously based on the actions of others? Can we choose anything if we just absorb what we see? I'd like you to ask questions like these and deepen your thoughts in your next posts. Great start, I hope you can expand on these ideas and come to some interesting insights in your later posts.

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